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Grip my neck tight and don’t let it go.
      Forgetting to let me breathe.

So I can taste blood, as I bite my lip.

Today is the day I please him.
With my innocent body.
As
    you
      rip
        apart
          my
            soul

“Admit you like it”
Rip my heart out, and drink the remains.

Then chain me to the bed,
    a neck with scars.

“Oh my oh my, you've been such a naughty girl”
Pitied by the daytime, it’s when vampires like you sleep.

“Oh my oh my, you've been such a naughty girl”
I just want to rip out your wicked heart.

Please forgive these tears running down my cheeks,
I swear I’ll devoid myself of all emotion.
Ah, I will moan when you command.
Listening to every will.


“I love you”
It hurts so much, the whips and chains.
I hate being tied down like this.


“I love you too.”
I'll be posting more poems soon. Because My Photoshop disk is gone. D:
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:iconarualcat:
I really like this poem :) It is hard, direct and beautiful.
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Zaiav Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! :D
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paws720 Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
featured here [link]
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Zaiav Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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zelaeii Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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FINALLY I AM RESPONDING!
You are simply amazing, don't ever stop writing!! And I love the visuals on this one too, they add a lot to the piece. WONDERFUL!
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Zaiav Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
DWAA Thanks
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I just want to say I loved this poem. Also, poetry is one of the most beautiful types of art to me because not only does the artist get to express their art but the reader also can not help but to interpret in whatever way it hits home to them. I, when reading this, did not conclude that it was about a physically abusive relationship or that it glorified any type of relationship. I identified with because, to my mind, it was reminiscent of a relationship that was emotionally and spiritually abusive. The physical descriptions to me were very sexual and seemed as if, like KariTBB suggested, the relationship had aspects of BDSM that the subject did not enjoy but participated in due to insecurities and the controlling nature of the relationship. Regardless, that is MY interpretation as the reader and says nothing about the artist and everything about me. Zaiav... you are an amazing poet and I look forward to reading many more of your works. If you are creating such strong emotions in readers (regardless of if they try to say otherwise... if they felt the need to comment and "chastise" you then you created a strong reaction) you are doing something oh so very right!!!! Have a wonderful weekend!
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Zaiav Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. I mean, seriously thank you with all my heart.
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DoAnAileronRoll Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your literature has just been featured in an article of the dA Gazette! [link]
Great work on it!
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Zaiav Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks~
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