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A black void escapes my lips.
As the infection of pain takes over.
I’m screaming to an empty room.
In it lays all my fears.

My eyes are filled with parasites.
Seeing nothing but black.
Which leaks it’s way into my heart.

Trembling fingers, and sweaty palms.
Bugs clinging to my hair.
Nesting in my skin.

I have been contaminated.
By the sins of others.
Nobody can harm me now.
I have been contaminated
By the whispers of the heartless.

Reaching forth for some light.
It only seems to burn my skin.

My right eye has been removed.
And left with a hole.
Head spinning round’ and round.

Sitting in this dirty contaminated room.
A perfect fit for me.
After not posting a poem for a bit I rummaged through some oldish (couple days old) and found this. Please enjoy!

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Babou-Shka Featured By Owner 1 day ago
Really nice, well done!
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Debbysh Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
#ArtSupporters has featured you: [link]
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
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Ketchup321 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013  Student General Artist
I love the visuals. Do you ever sit down and just write whatever comes to mind? Get your mind thinking for a second and have maybe a general direction and then just write down whatever comes to mind? I think you should try that for practice if you don't already because I see some really good potential in here. I love the image of the eye torn out and bugs in the hair, sitting in a dark room with shaking, sweaty hands. :) It looks really cool, congrats :)
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :D Your comment made my day!!!
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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hopefully that's a good wow? :D
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waiting-for-wings Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
of course!
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ssensory Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student Writer
Now this really does deserve a DD! You wrote this so well, (I love your word usage) and it really captivated me. Great job! :la:
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:blush: Thank you so much. I've never been given a DD but hope one day to do so! THANK YOU!
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