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    His hateful eyes.
    Which killed my parents.
    That which burned my arms.
    With sinful marks.
    His loving eyes.
    Which killed my parents.
    That kissed my arms.
    With loving hearts.


This all happened, faster then I imagined.

Here I am staring at a murder, falling in love.


    I'll kill for you, sweetie. Let's end the world together.
    Won't it be fun?
    Our killing spree?

    Watch us world! As our murders show on tv, and run by your eyes!

    WATCH US KILL!
    Enjoy this!
    Watch…him…die…
    I never could forgive such a disgusting man.
      Watch me get locked up.
        His dead eyes.
        Which killed my parents.
        That kissed and burned my arms.
        With sinful and loving marks.
This is an entry for :iconlive-love-write: I loved this prompt!
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Critique by WarriorCatsLover14 May 18, 2012, 2:18:13 PM
This is amazing. Like, seriously, wow! Just wow! I'm amazed :D I love how you used the different font for different paragraphs and such. I also like how the character fell in love with the person who killed his/her(I think its a her?) parents, but she also hated him/her. :3 I think it is cute.
Anyway, this poem is one of the best I've seen on here. It is very EPICAL and AWESOME. I wish I had your talent DX Lolz.
So yeah, it was very original and interesting. Also, very different and a very good idea. Great job and please keep on writing poetry like this!
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RollingTomorrow Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012   General Artist
Thank you for participating in our prompt at #Live-Love-Write! :iconlachoirplz:

This really was an intriguing piece! The contrasting outlooks and formatting you used really made it fascinating.

Good work!


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Founder of #Writers--club, #LandoftheSky, and #Live-Love-Write
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
THANKS! :heart:
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EstrangeloEdessa Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really love the way you use formatting. It's fantastic, the way that it shows her differing opinions, her changes in mood. Good job.
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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IceQueenAzure Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Congratulations! Your piece will be placed in the featured folder for :iconartist-platform: for this month. It will be posted on June 1st!
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Zaiav Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:jawdrop: OH MY GOSH! THANK YOU!!! THANK YOU!! THANK YOU!!
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IceQueenAzure Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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Social-Insomnia Featured By Owner May 23, 2012
very giddy. I love your style of writing.
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Zaiav Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
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