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Voices, Personalities.
Somebody else, is inside this head.
I'm not crazy, right?
I can't let them get the best of me...

Her name..
It has a name?
It has a gender?
It's just my mind cracking.

It shouldn't exist
Right..?


    She comforts me, whispering words in my mind. She has come to exist, Only for the sake of my sanity..


She wishes she could hold me,
But she only exists in my mind.

They tell me, that she is wrong.
I should overcome her,
that she is only repressed memories. Taking form

She will speak for me one day..
When the weight becomes too much..
...Not much to say.
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EDIT: Thank you so much for all of the favorites! It means so much, this poem was very dear to me, and it makes me so happy to see so many people enjoying it!!! :happycry:
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Rae-Bloody-Grace Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
the last two lines remind me of a couple of my personalities. sometimes I swing completely off kilter and flip out on people, so one of the others takes over and shoves me in a corner until I'm calm/sane again, usually apologizing on my behalf since most of my friends are pretty accepting of the other personalities (the really close friends can tell the differences between them)
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, thank you so much for sharing this with me. :D
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LunaPhantom1999 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is very good
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! it means a ton!
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LunaPhantom1999 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Np!
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autumnlit Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
"She will speak for me one day..
When the weight becomes too much.."
Haunting last lines! Beautiful job Zaiav! =)
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
AWeeeeeeeeeee...Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :heart:
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autumnlit Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
You're welcome! :hug:
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Lovely-Madness-13 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very well done!! Awesomesauce job!! ^^
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! I worked hard on it! :squee:
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