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Voices, Personalities.
Somebody else, is inside this head.
I'm not crazy, right?
I can't let them get the best of me...

Her name..
It has a name?
It has a gender?
It's just my mind cracking.

It shouldn't exist
Right..?


    She comforts me, whispering words in my mind. She has come to exist, Only for the sake of my sanity..


She wishes she could hold me,
But she only exists in my mind.

They tell me, that she is wrong.
I should overcome her,
that she is only repressed memories. Taking form

She will speak for me one day..
When the weight becomes too much..
...Not much to say.
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EDIT: Thank you so much for all of the favorites! It means so much, this poem was very dear to me, and it makes me so happy to see so many people enjoying it!!! :happycry:
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Rae-Bloody-Grace Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
the last two lines remind me of a couple of my personalities. sometimes I swing completely off kilter and flip out on people, so one of the others takes over and shoves me in a corner until I'm calm/sane again, usually apologizing on my behalf since most of my friends are pretty accepting of the other personalities (the really close friends can tell the differences between them)
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow, thank you so much for sharing this with me. :D
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LunaPhantom1999 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is very good
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much! it means a ton!
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LunaPhantom1999 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Np!
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autumnlit Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
"She will speak for me one day..
When the weight becomes too much.."
Haunting last lines! Beautiful job Zaiav! =)
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
AWeeeeeeeeeee...Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :heart:
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autumnlit Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
You're welcome! :hug:
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Lovely-Madness-13 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very well done!! Awesomesauce job!! ^^
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks! I worked hard on it! :squee:
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ToxicArrogance Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2012
Very cool
I often feel that the voices in my head have so much personality that they deserve to have their own bodies XD
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
SAME!
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Duke-Of-Chains Featured By Owner May 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Rather lethargic...it reminds me of the state in which the insane mind borders reality and the warped version of their perception of said reality. Good portrayal of this narrative perspective.
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
THANK YOU!!! :D
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Duke-Of-Chains Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're very much welcome.
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lifesucks12 Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
love it hold on to her
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Zaiav Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks, I will try!
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magicalisis Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I LOVE THIS!!!
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:iconzaiav:
Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much.
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magicalisis Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome!
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SuzukiShiba Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I hate the voices I get. They're always calling me names, saying they're going to kill me and my family and commanding me to do things. (Not that I'm going to)

There's only one nice voice that comforts me. Nice poem, anyway.
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm sorry. I can only wish you best.
Thank you for sharing this.
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RailAybara Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think you did well on creating the effect of people doubting themselves about this, or whatever they are going through.
Good job :)
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much! :D
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RailAybara Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are very welcome
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AmaiMirai Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this,
The last two lines are what captivates me tho

Amazing piece :)
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so very much.
This poem took alot to write, and the last to lines were my favorite.
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AmaiMirai Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It was my pleasure :)
And those lines were the perfect way to close such a beautiful poem :)
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so so sososososo much! :happycry:
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AmaiMirai Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:) anytime
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AmericanWildCat Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wonderful! I love the part "She comforts me, whispering words in my mind, She has come to exist, Only for the sake of my sanity" truly speaks!
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much! ^.^
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AmericanWildCat Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no problem....I really enjoy tour work! cant wait for more
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so so so so much!!! :3
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Crazyone222 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love the story this tells, very fascinating. Especially "she wishes she could hold me, but she only exists in my mind." Good work!
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you very much!! ^.^
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jesd2 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012
Lovely poem. Instant fav. :)
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much!
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jesd2 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012
No problem. :)
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TobbieGurl385 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Student General Artist
This is beautiful. I love the imagery and sadness used.
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much!
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TobbieGurl385 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Student General Artist
You're very welcome. ^^
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Sefti Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congrats on making the first page Sara! :)
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
*Dies of happiness*
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Vulasaur Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Student General Artist
I have a voice. She never told me her name, but I call her Bianca.
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You should try and get to know her, she is apart of you. No matter how hard people try and get rid of her.
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Vulasaur Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Student General Artist
She's very mean to me, but I would never get rid of her. I'm very quiet and polite. She's my tough side.
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh, that's weird. But it;s good that you wouldn't get rid of her.
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Kitteh1011 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Cool it's such a nice poem like thing lol I love your icon!! :squee:
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so very much! I love your icon too! :squee: :icongwompplz:
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