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Times like this when I can’t find the rights words.
Times like this when I find myself crying.
As I have no way to express.
But this pencil twirling in my hand.

Sometimes I’ll make art, and proudly show it.
Sometimes I’ll make shit, and quickly destroy it.

With either I find they both seem to end in the same way.
With a simple message, strewed through long and tedious words.

That could be said much simpler, and probably has.
But still I say it, for it’s all I have.

COMMENTS AND FAVORITES ARE LOVED~!!!
HAVE A BEAUTIFUL DAY!
Thanks to :iconzelaeii: For always being there for me, inspiring me to become a writer, and just being the best friend anyone could ask for!

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:iconleodormouse:
LeoDormouse Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013
"Sometimes I’ll make art, and proudly show it.
Sometimes I’ll make shit, and quickly destroy it."
Best line EVER :iconcocoheartplz:
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:iconzaiav:
Zaiav Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much!!!!!
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:iconleodormouse:
LeoDormouse Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
You're welcome :)
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shadowstorm101 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is pretty much how i feel
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:iconzaiav:
Zaiav Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm happy I made something you could relate too!
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shadowstorm101 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
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GuineaGirl106 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow... i love those end lines... beautiful :D
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:iconzaiav:
Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much!
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GuineaGirl106 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
np!
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Miss-A-sketches Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's a good piece and I think you stated very nicely what a great many of us feel. ;)
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:iconzaiav:
Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much!
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Miss-A-sketches Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My pleasure. :D
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chancerox Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
exactly how i feel. art is kind of just the perfect remedy for everything. beautiful work :)
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:iconzaiav:
Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I know right!
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LetsCutTheSecrets Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
LIKE! just everything about it is well done! I especially like the little tid-bits of your humor that show through Great poem.
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:iconzaiav:
Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks, I'm a humorous person, so I guess it worked into my poem!
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Medoriko Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Student Writer
Relatable and nicely worded :heart:
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:iconzaiav:
Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks!
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Medoriko Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Student Writer
Your icon looks like the cat I just adopted :lol:
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:iconzaiav:
Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Awee :D
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:iconmedoriko:
Medoriko Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Student Writer
I know :love: Totally unrelated to your writing...but...I had to say :lmao:
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:iconzaiav:
Zaiav Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
XD It's ok! I am just as loving of peoples profile pics!
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Medoriko Featured By Owner May 3, 2013  Student Writer
Oh, ok XD I'm glad I'm not the only ones :lol:
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Snowy-Wings Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013
Recognizable!
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:iconzaiav:
Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks!
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Umeko13 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well spoken and genuine. I'm glad I found this. :3
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I'm glad you found it too!
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GhostWriterV Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Great Piece Of Work
pravoOo
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you a ton!
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GhostWriterV Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
no problem :)
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homestucker42 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is exactly how I feel. Thank you for writing this! It was really good :)
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:iconzaiav:
Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks~!
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iPoisonplumPresents Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Professional General Artist
"Times like this when I can’t find the rights words.
Times like this when I find myself crying.
As I have no way to express.
But this pencil twirling in my hand."

Those lines are exactly how I'm feeling right now and I believe many who love to write have experienced this and can relate to this complex/mystifying emotion. Great job in expressing the sentiments of a writer :) Keep up the awesome work!- Co-founder of #deviant-20s
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Oh my gosh thank you so much!
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The best time to be a poet is when your emotions are swirling high
When the pencil is flying from your grasp
When you're dying for someone to hear

The words that swirl
The words that blend
Those moments that make you fly
Why won't they come more often?


RANDOM POEM INSPIRED OFF OF THIS. :la:
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:iconzaiav:
Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
That's amazing! :D
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fantasylover103 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Really? Thank you!
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zelaeii Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is EXACTLY how I feel. I want to see all my ideas and stories come to life somehow, but the only way they can exist is through my words. And I'm not the best writer out there.

So yeah, this is so true, and wonderfully written!
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Awee, thanks!
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MrHello556 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013
I liked this its relatable. good job
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:iconzaiav:
Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks!
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Loxome Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Very good. It was very very good.
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:iconzaiav:
Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Awe, thanks!
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Loxome Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Student General Artist
No prob.
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LaCiCi Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is so simple and short poem, but I really get it. ^^ I love it!
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:iconzaiav:
Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!!
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UselessItalian Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely lovely. :3
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Zaiav Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Thanks!!!!!!!
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UselessItalian Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course. ^^
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Kaolyne Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Story of my life.

Nice work. :3
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